Egg diary

Mon 30 May 2016

Sitting on the egg tray waiting for my owner to come, she came I said to myself. My owner suddenly came and picked me up I was wondering where I was going but I was happy. I came to the kitchen and my owner drew me. I was excited to have a face,eye and a home. It was really comfortable having a owner and a new bed. 

My writing goal

My writing goal so far this term has been to… describe my ideas in enough detail using strong words so that my readers understand what I mean and can paint a full picture in their minds of what we are describing Here is my piece of my writing about rain. How do you think I ´m going with my goal? Drip, drop, drip, drop… silence, suddenly it started to rain, It looked like as if a giant was stomping on the roof !! WOOSH, WOOSH, BOOM! I felt scared in my classroom but was wondering how the rain falls down from the sky. After I was looking at the window, I felt like I was smelling a soaked clothes that haven´t been washed for ages!! After the school was finished, me and my friend was waiting for my mum to come. … ¨Finally my mum came¨ I said to myself. We were trying to get inside the car not to get wet. Through the car window I could see the rain blur around.